Showing posts with label short story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label short story. Show all posts

Friday, August 25, 2017

Sound the Alarm

           I am currently the vice president of my college’s Creative Arts Club. It’s part of my job to come up with creative activities to help foster creative thinking and that, well, get my club members producing art. This past week we did a flash fiction exercise where we were all given the same opening sentence and had 20 minutes to write a one-page story. I enjoyed what I came up with so much that I came home and rewrote it for the blog. Here it is for your reading pleasure.

Sound the Alarm


     An unfamiliar alarm rang out stopping the hustle and bustle of the city square. It wasn’t one of the normal alarms signaling our city’s normal daily activities. Instead, it was the loud, grating, angry emergency alarm causing everyone to freeze in place. The citizens looked around in confusion not sure what they are supposed to do at this point. A virtual teleprojector appeared from thin air. The Mayor was on screen sitting stiff and meticulously groomed like a marionette puppet. He began to address the city.
            “My fellow citizens of the great common wealth of Pacifica,” His eyebrows formed a deep menacing furrow, “We have reason to suspect that a domestic terrorist group is at work within the borders of our fair city.”
            A whispered gasp was heard over the square followed by heavy silence. Everyone was listening intently to the mayor’s every word. Instinctively, I pulled my jacket closer around me letting its collar conceal part of my face. It was the same drab gray standard issue designated to all factory workers.
            “This terrorist group is a Trojan Horse, referring to themselves as the Saviors, espousing propaganda against the city of Pacifica and the Authority.” The Mayor cautioned, hardly blinking his dull glassy eyes. “We urge our citizens to not fall prey to their unnatural ideologies and anarchist agenda. As Mayor, I encourage all our citizens to be ever vigilant and report any of the following suspicious behavior, anyone not performing their assigned duties, anyone expressing clear or implied discontent against the Authority, anyone out after curfew without proper documentation, or any other behavior out of the normal. Together we can stomp out this extreme organization. We thank you in advance for your complete cooperation, it is deeply valued and mandatory.
            As quickly as the teleprojector appeared, it was gone. There was a brief pause after the message before the citizens carried on with their day. Many exchanged quick glances. Gone was the puzzled look of confusion. In its place now was fear and suspicion of their neighbors. The Mayor’s corrupted seed was already starting to take root in the hearts of the citizens. It was a brilliant move by the Authority, turning neighbor against neighbor. The more divided we are the easier we are to subdue. If we are busy looking for fault in one another we will be blinded by the control going on around us.
            Eventually, everyone picked up and carried on with their allocated tasks for the day, though a little less defeated than they realize. I smiled ruefully at the blank air where the Mayor gave his message. Soon a different alarm would sound. The Savior’s alarm that would awaken a new era for the people of Pacifica, the country and nothing will ever be the same. They had no idea what they are up against, our roots went deep back to the rise of the Authority and our day of reckoning was close at hand.

            There was much that had to be done. Revolutions don’t happen overnight. The people must be ready for it to take hold. Pacifica was close but needed a push in the right direction by the Saviors.  But first, I had to put a knife into the heart of the person who sold us out to the Authority. 

Wednesday, July 5, 2017

Mario the Idiot

Backstory: While searching through old data discs from back in the day, I found this story. Completely awestruck by the quality of this work (for my age at the time), and having no actual memory of writing it, I decided to salvage the text file and post it for all to see. The following was written on April 22, 2001 by my kid self. Minor edits have been made for consistency. Enjoy.


Mario the Idiot

a short story by
Jeremy Minney


All I have to say is-a Friday the 13th was-a NOT, I repeat, was-a NOT Good Friday. It-a was-a bad Friday! Let me-a tell-a you why...

One day, I was at my pad eating a Nutty Bar and watching Shroom News, when I heard a loud crash. It-a was the door. Somebody had knocked over my door. I was ready to fight, then I realized it was Luigi.

"Mario!" Luigi screamed, "Somethin' weird is-a happening!"

"Luigi, you idiot, you broke down the door!"

"No, Mario, you don't understand!"

"What do I not understand?! You broke the door!"

Luigi then whispered something into my ear. It-a is-a so horrifying, I cannot tell you what it-a is-a. Luigi and me headed out into the back yard to see the strangest thing ever. It's-a crazy Koopa Troopa.

"See, Mario? He's gone berserk!" Luigi said to-a me: Mario.

"HELP ME!! IT'S MY SHELL!! MY SHELL!! AIIIIEEEE!!" screamed the Koopa in agony as he bounced around. But near the Koopa, I saw a Shy Guy watching him. I walked over to him so I could ask-a him-a what-a was-a wrong-a with-a the-a Koopa-a.


"Hey, what's-a going on here?" I asked the Shy Guy.

"A Goomba got in his shell and is trying to eat him alive," replied the Shy Guy.

"Come on, Mario. Get the Goomba out!" Luigi asked of me with-a the tears in his eyes-a.

"No way! Me ain't touchin' that!" I yelled back.


After some arguing, I had not a choice but to help the Koopa. First, I tried jumping on it's-a shell.

"OW!" yelled the Koopa, "Don't jump on me!"

"Sorry," I said back with disappointment.


I then tried sticking my hand into the Koopa Shell, but I got bitten by the Goomba!

"OUCH!!!" I screamed and jumped back, falling onto Toad, squishing him like a pancake.

"OWWW!!" Toad cried as he had-a just entered the story.

"Mario, what the shrooms is going on?" Toad asked me, "Why are you playing with a Koopa?"

"I don't-a play with the Koopas, Toad," I explained, "This-a Koopa is-a being attacked by a Goomba!" I stood up and-a dusted myself off.


Now here's where I made my biggest mistake...


"Hey, I gots an idea!" I said as I pulled out a Bob-omb, lit it-a, and shoved it-a into the Koopa shell-a.

"AHHH!!" everyone screamed. Toad planted himself in the ground, Luigi hid behind a tiny rock, the Shy Guy was long gone, and I was just standing there like an idiot. The Bob-omb exploded and the Goomba fell to the grass-a. He had little X's on his eyes. And that's when I thought I-a saved the day.

"Problem solved!" I said and smiled, "Goomba dead!" But the Koopa... was-a not-a smiling. He got angry because I blew up his-a shell and attacked me while he was in-a his underwear.

"AHHH!! You be nasty!! Get-sa off-a me-a!!" I yelled as a squirmed around. I ran around in-a circles with a Koopa biting into my skull. I think I-a fainted after that because I-a lost so much blood.

* * *

I woke up in-a the hospital. When I opened my eyes, Luigi was staring at-a me-a. He looked like a bug, so I smacked him by accident.

"Ouch..." Luigi groaned.

"You're not-a bug," I said to him. I got out of the hospital bed and got my Mario outfit back on.